See it!!

Today, I have see two essay...very interesting!! It is a noob write it:

The two happiness in the world...
To love
This one is to show that you love some one with your whole heart, especially every!
Be love
Be love means, let every one love you as a truthful friend but not as a couple.

The unknow world or heaven
I woke up in an unknow world, no where to be found, cold and hungry, lonely and scared, until he appered, saying come follow me....the brought into a place. I looked around and saw myself. The things I've done. I released I 've done it...I ask him who are you, he answered, I'm God, you one and only saviour you had trust. I broke down in tear, begging for forgiveness.
Is good? Sorry lah...Adriel....